Carlos Rivero 5964829

Regarding what the author Deresiewicz says about our culture of celebrity and connectivity, I do see myself in this argument. I am the type of person who is heavily involved with social media and connections with the world. I do believe it takes willingness to “be unpopular”. I am the type of person who updates their social media occasionally, as to remain relevant and active to everyone else. This level of connectivity keeps me informed and entertained every hour of the day. Good.

As I disconnected myself from any media which could possibly contain news, I did not experience much difference. I am typically not one to follow the news so often unless it is required of me for a class or an assignment. Hence, disconnecting myself from news media was not a big deal for me. I simply filled in the small gaps with other things I usually to do as my day goes such as homework, or meetings with various clubs and people. The solitude I experienced was of relief. It felt good to not have to worry about the external events going on around the world and focus more on my own thoughts and the day to day things in my life. However, it was complicated to ignore the news. In my chats with friends, my app notifications and even from other people’s conversations, the news was prominent. We have grown so accustomed to being surrounded by the news that we sometimes take its presence for granted. Additionally, the news does help us think to ourselves and benefit us when it comes to developing decisions. It gives us power so that we can think for ourselves, thus contributing to our solitude. Solitude gives us the power to get to know more about ourselves; for our sense of individualism to strengthen. Very good.

Furthermore, after I disconnected myself for 48 hours from the news, I also felt lost. Although I was more focused on myself and my tasks at hand, I was not so sure of the problems going around the world that may also affect the moods of the people around me.  As good as solitude feels sometimes, it can be selfish to indulge in it too much. The popular (virtually clichéd, but good connection) quote “ignorance is bliss” becomes evident in this scenario. The enjoyment of not knowing something does not really last long in this modern era of immediate communication. For the most part, the more we know the more we want to know, and so on. If I were to be given the opportunity to stay on a safe exclusive island on a weekend with no technology that would allow me to access any news, I would take the chance. I do believe that we need news to go about our lives and the way we handle and make decisions, but in this example solitude would occupy any need of knowing about our world. Knowing myself I would not experience anxiety nor any worries. I would genuinely savor every moment of free thought that is not being influenced by extraneous sources. “I think therefore I am” would be turned into “I don’t think, therefore I still am”.

Excellent report.

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The End of Solitude – Christine Cabreja

Understanding of the concepts is good. Use paragraphs. Each paragraph should be a mini-thesis, and stand on its own. A big blob of text is a turn-off for the reader. Writing needs some work. Tighten up the sentences. Watch your spelling. 

 

 

Why must it be so hard to let go of technology? I tried to remove myself, but it was very difficult. Reflecting to on Hurricane Irma, I questioned how I made it through 48 hours then and why I couldn’t commit to replicating that now. William Deresiewicz had his essay, “The End of Solitude,” published in The Chronicle of Higher Education. I read it and his words resonated with me. I have a blog and made it a necessity found it necessary to post every day on Instagram to build up a following. My anxiety grew by the minute. As Deresiewicz states, “The camera has created a culture of celebrity” and “celebrity and connectivity are both ways of becoming known.” (paragraph here) Thoughts of losing followers crossed my mind. I aspire to have a large following in order to impact many lives.  I tried to read or start conversation with my family members. My idleness created boredom. Not being productive on my phone, either creating content or staying connected with others, allowed me to become aware that I am in somewhat incapable of differentiating between idleness and boredom. Once everyone couldn’t generate more conversation, When none could generate conversation, I just laid in my bed and listened to music. The boredom combined with solitude lead me into feeling lonely. Many introspective thoughts ran through my mind. Negative thoughts created a dark cloud over the relationship with myself. (paragraph here) I started to meditate and convert those thoughts into positive ones. In these situations, I do value solitude. As Deresiewicz says, “hell is other people. The soul is forced back into itself – hence the development of more austere, more embattled form of self-validation, Trilling’s “authenticity,” where the essential relationship is oneself.” Social media has created a mass of replication. Things that on in trend are the societal expectations of beauty and popularity. Once I remind myself of the value of my authenticity, my self-esteem increases. Others tend to put you down if you look different. My Instagram is a platform I use to increase my self- love and express my authenticity. (paragraph here) Through social media, “young people seem to feel that they can make themselves fully known to one another. They seem to lack a sense of their own depths, and the value of keeping them hidden.” I am an open book of some sort, but I value keeping private matters to myself. My blog is to encourage others to find themselves instead of exerting certain information for others to think they are likeable likable. In that solitude, I started to write down my values and analyzed what was really important. Social media has increase the want increased the desire to be a celebrity but that comes with a lack of privacy I am not willing to give up. Being connected to yourself and who you are protects yourself from outside judgements. I hope everyone has a moment of solitude to reflect and learn something about themselves every day.

Isolation

William Deresiewicz writes about the “end of solitude” where he explains that nobody in today’s society is truly alone, and I agree. For 48 hours this week I was immersed in a world without news and without social media, and it was amazing (might want a slightly better and more objective word choice). During these 48 hours without news and social media I realized what it means to be disconnected from everywhere else in the world. Usually I would know what was happening in a country thousands of miles away from me thanks to a morning news show, without this morning routine I was alone. I was disconnected from the rest of the world, but was able to be a more active person in my own society. I replaced my morning routine with a text to my friends about what they wanted to do later on in the day and when we should meet up; replacing my mundane routine with a plan to enjoy myself later on. Good summary, but you should have tied your situation in more with the Deresiewicz reading in this paragraph.

Not only was I missing out on my dose of morning news, but also on social media postings by my friends and family that I follow on Instagram and Snapchat becoming my own person. I was my own person in the sense that I did not care as much about the way I acted or the things I said, I knew that they would not have a lasting effect forever (I understand your point, but the sentence should have been re-worded to be a little clearer.). In this sense I experienced a type of freedom.(full stop) I was free from the hundreds of prying eyes on social media, free of the judgement that others give from the other side of their screen (Good, but this doesn’t have as much to do with news.). In a way I also became a more social being, I went and experienced what people posted about with them. For those 48 hours I took the media out of social media reaching out to friends with a text and attending social events instead of just scrolling through my Instagram feed wishing I was a more exciting person.

In addition to being more social, I was also more alone, I experienced solitude the way that Deresiewicz describes it. I sat alone in the dark in bed contemplating life, asking myself existential questions and trying to answer them sometimes finding answers where there were none (Again, this is good, but it needs to pertain to the news blackout.). In those moments it became clearer and clearer to me who I really was and what I truly enjoy in life; being with people and being alone. It sounds confusing, but what I mean is that I enjoy going out and being with my friends and family, as well as attending social events, but I still enjoy my alone time and I need a bit of solitude at the end of the day.

At the end of this assignment I have come to the conclusion that the news (there was hardly any mention of news in the essay) and social media are not a necessary intrusion of our solitude. Instead, news and social media brainwash us and take away our solitude, they train us all to think a certain way and not for ourselves(On the right track, but how exactly? Elaborate.). It is not a coincidence that many of the people who ask the deeper questions in class or find the deeper meaning in things were not allowed television or social media as children. They truly think for themselves with no outside influence. Everyone should go through this experience and find out what solitude truly is and what it feels like.

 

Essay could have elaborated more on ‘our culture of celebrity and connectivity’ in the context of Dersiewicz, and why and how news is important. Otherwise, good work.

48-hour news blackout – Janina Williams

Overall, pretty good. Solid analysis, good integration of Deresiewicz. Sentences need work. Some are fragments, some run-on. Consider reading aloud to check for flow. 

 

Janina Williams

IDS 3309

10/09/17

 

The thought of being alone can make an average person feel on edge. Especially in an age of social media, interactive video games, messenger apps, and so forth. We are always plugged in.  The concept of solitude in our digital information society isn’t impossible. You can choose how much to filter in. The idea of disconnecting yourself from all form of media for a 48-hour duration causes an increased sense of solitude, from the withdrawals of daily routine habit’s being temporally halted.

Deresiewicz said, “Celebrity and connectivity are both ways of becoming known.” People want to be seen. They want to share their stories and experiences with others:  For instance, snap chat, Facebook and Instagram. Platforms used to be seen. (Not sure what you mean here) We are constantly updating pictures and mini video documentaries of our lives. Everyone sees where you vacation, eat and live. And what you’re doing at almost every hour of the day. When you’re constantly consumed about being seen. (Sentence fragment. Connect with next sentence) What time do you have to yourself? There is no time to self-reflect. Excessive use of anything can be strenuous. Having balance would be a good starting point. if we use them in moderation and just sign off for a couple hours we can achieve solitude.

Disconnecting wasn’t easy. You don’t think about it when you go reach for your phone and casually press the screen to open an app or got to a website. It’s almost second nature, it’s just the normal way of carrying on your life. It’s the few minutes you get to get away and immerse yourself. Seeing, what is the world up to? Just from observing a typical day in one’s life you can see how much relying on technology coerces our path. From looking at a weather app, to see if I may need an umbrella today. To mapping out the easiest route home. To checking on yelp for the best lunch spots in my area. In every aspect of life there seems to be an APP to assist. Even though it is affecting my daily choices, I did find most of the information useful to my daily task.

News is an important avenue of information. It is a necessary intrusion on our solitude. It is important to know current events in politics, local and international.it informs us on things we need to know about. Our country, citizens and leaders.  News is providing proof. It is informing us on topics and giving us knowledge. Letting the public know what is going on. News does not create more solitude. If anything, it’s bringing to light a world of information. Making us feel more a part of a community. For example, when catastrophes happen people have a common denominator they are all citizens of that area or nation being affected. They band together by helping their community.

Technology has come a long way. Some of these websites and programs that we are plugged into are an asset. The wave of new media has made life easier. People are more well informed, but we are also more consumed by technology. Nether to say it is bad nor good. Just examine how it is changing daily life and if it has a positive or negative effect. Every generation has a new form of media, it is forever changing, and while it changes so will we.

Have We Reached The End Of Solitude?

In one of the first paragraphs of “The End of Solitude”, William Deresiewicz writes, “technology is taking away our privacy and concentration, but it is also taking away are ability to be alone.” As I read deeply into his article, I found inspiration to take this assignment seriously and isolate myself from the news for 48-hours. (we know that this is supposed to be done. Please keep the writing concise).  This week was a hard time to stay away from the media. I began my isolation on Tuesday and I was leaving out of town to northern Florida on Friday. Least to say, I didn’t even know there was a hurricane going toward  coming to where I was heading.my destination.

At work on Wednesday, the women in the office started talking about a storm passing through the panhandle later in the week leaving myself confused. I had stayed away from watching any news or reading the automatic updates from my smartphone. Even when I over heard the ladies speaking about the hurricane I refused to look it up and wait until the 48 hours were over. This was extremely hard, especially since I wanted to know if my weekend trip would be worth it. I found myself anxious with an itch to check every social media platform.

I even took this assignment a bit further and tried my hardest to lower the amount of times I checked my social media such as Instagram, Snapchat, Facebook and Twitter. The idea came to me when I read about the teenager who is never alone for more than 10 minutes at once because of technology and text messages in Deresiewicz article. Sometimes I didn’t even notice myself on social media because it is such a happen to do when I am bored at work or waiting for someone on campus.

While keeping away from the news, I found myself lost and unsure of what was happening in the outside world. I also felt this feeling when Hurricane Irma came through and cause the power outage (Doing this during Irma was bad luck. Be sure to keep personal safety in mind). After the power came back, my cable would not work due to Comcast having issues with their connection. This really caused me to be isolated to the outside world. I could not watch any news for about a week. I then went to my family members house and connected to their Wi-Fi and the first thing I did was search up the news on WSVN. I had read so much about the aftermath of the hurricane that I had no idea occurred.

News is extremely important and much of the time we speak or read about it unknowingly. It gives you a sense of security because you are aware of what is going on in your neighborhood, city, state, country and world at a moments notice. I tend to read the news when I am alone or bored, thinking that it is facilitating the boredom, but it is actually decreasing my ability to be in complete solitude.

Good, but essay could have used a little more analysis on how the effects of the media blackout pertained to Deresiewicz.

Solitude

Well written and thoughtful analysis. Excellent integration of concepts and narrative. Watch sentence length and the odd grammatical error. 

 

In “The End of solitude” by William Deresiewicz, he explains how the people in today’s world are living exclusively in relation to others, and what disappears from our lives is solitude. (This would be better as 2 sentences) Technology is taking away our privacy and our concentration, but it is also taking away our ability to be alone. He mentions (stated)  that the camera has created a culture of celebrity, and the computer is creating a culture of connectivity. Both of these are ways to becoming known and connected. During the blackout, I understood what Deresiewicz was talking about in regards to these two cultures. We put ourselves in social media 24/7 because this is how we become real to ourselves. People feel the want to be seen by others because it validates who we are. Today, I fall into that category because I have become accustomed to the idea that if I post a picture or status on my social media, and others comment on it, then it makes me feel important or at least that someone cares. (Better as two shorter sentences) The fact that I couldn’t use any social media for 48 hours, made me realize that I take other people’s validation too serious.

Deresiewicz spoke about our biggest fear in today’s world, and that great fear is isolation. We are all threatened by loneliness, which causes us to constantly be in the realm of technology. Whether it’s watching TV, getting on Facebook, emails, or text messages, it is a battle with us to disconnect, be in the present, and accept solitude. Solitude enables us to secure the integrity of the self as well as to explore it. Being disconnected from all technology taught me a great lesson. It made me realize that there are more activities to do that make me happy which don’t require being with other people. During the blackout, I filled up my time doing yoga, coloring, taught myself how to cook, and even started writing in a journal. Doing these activities alone felt amazing and peaceful because I wasn’t worrying about anyone or any gossip on social media. It brought me back to when I was a child, and social media or text messaging never existed. As a kid, I always occupied myself with going outside to play and actually engaging in activities that required making friends in person. Today, people are making friends through digital media and it isn’t always authentic. Most have friends on Twitter who they never even met before.

Nonetheless, not being able to watch the news was pretty difficult for me. Not getting information about what is going on in the world was challenging because I like to feel informed and educated about any global event or the weather. Most people take the news for granted because it is always accessible, but we would rather be on social media instead. Once you put yourself in isolation, that is when you realize that the news is actually a privilege. In this experiment, I learned that taking a break from technology is a healthy thing to do and people should do it more often. One should appreciate solitude and they must not be afraid to be alone.

Individual Assignment 3: 48-hour news blackout Ashley Exposito

Through this assignment I was able to better understand what Deresiewicz means to be in complete solitude. We are never truly alone. Through technology we are in constant connection with one another. This type of constant communication, although it is useful, it hinders us from creating our own identities. We are constantly viewing images of other people’s lives and comparing them to our own. We also have a tendency to take on the opinions and ideas of others instead of coming up with our own.Good.

These 48 hours of solitude really made me aware of my dependency on technology, especially my cellphone. The first few hours of disconnect weren’t too difficult I kept myself busy with outdoor activities like running. After a couple of hours is when I started to feel a bit anxious. All I could think of is how badly I wanted to look at all of the social media platforms I use. I found myself longing to check my Instagram feed as if keeping up with other people’s lives gave me satisfaction in my own life. This lack of being able to communicate or know what my friends were doing did give me a bit of anxiety. This lack of communication made me wonder about how it was possible for people to communicate with one another before this type of technology was developed. Interesting, although the blackout specifically pertains to news. Instagram probably would have been fine as long as you didn’t look at any current event, sports, or news pages.

As Deresiewicz explains my generation is constantly seeking the opposite of solitude. We crave attention and interaction. We are ultimately afraid of solitude. This 48 hour disconnect from all things technological made me realize that I, like many others in my generation, fear solitude(full stop). and I especially fear not knowing. Through these two days I found myself picking up the remote and getting so close to turning a news channel on because I was dying to know what was happening in our world especially during this tumultuous time in our country. So much can happen in two days and it was hard for me to avoid picking up my phone and reading The New York Times.

What I decided to do during this time of disconnect is organize. I began with my closet and finished my day of organizing with my agenda as I fixed all of the dates and times Hurricane Irma uprooted just like the trees in my backyard. (As they say, a clean house is the sign of a broken computer.) Even though I did try to keep myself busy I continued to gravitate towards my phone. I picked it up and put it down at least 20 times that day. As the 48 hours came to an end I immediately reached for my phone. As I saw the list of notifications pile up I realized how relieved I was to be able to communicate with my friends and know what was going on in the world. This assignment has taught me that I need to become better at distancing myself from technology and become more involved with the physical world around me. I have to learn to be okay with moments of solitude.

 

Very good work.